Good...
...But you messed up a bit. The recorded instruments, especially the bass line, were way off the tempo and didn't really fit in with the calmness of the song.
The song itself was quite repetitive, as it always had the same background, and an absence of main song, making it go nowhere. And that's exactly what it is, since the song ends abruptly in the middle of a phrase.
I really feel the grove, thought, and I see the potential of the song, it's just that you really messed it up with the virtual instruments...
No hard feelings.